Sunday, November 02, 2008

Evolution?


Spotted this at the McDonalds on Third. There is something about the restaurants on Third. They all have a dirty, desperate feel to them. Yet, the Taco Bell has tolled for me, many a time. I don't know if this "Easy Cheese" container is some sort of smear against the mayor of McDonalds. There is some cheese remaining in an ejaculated state right at the tip of the actuator/nozzle.

This snapshot reminds me of something you might see as a prompt for a creative writing exercise. So how about this. Let's keep it simple. Haiku. 5, 7, 5. Submit your Haiku as a comment and I will post it to the body of this text, as well. Or you can email me directly. Either way, I'll put it here:

Extreme Haiku Poetry Corner Place

Compressed curds and whey
Squirts puddles of pleasure and
Makes my smile orange.
Hank

Cold crusty ending
A dying breath calls out for
Its quarter-pound love
Nick

Mayor McCheese weeps
A Fillet O Fish was his
Was burgled, instead
Newsdredge

arches of gold lure me in
canned cheese seduces
but would you like fries with that?
Steve G.

5 comments:

Hank said...

Compressed curds and whey
Squirts puddles of pleasure and
Makes my smile orange.

The Spovangelist said...

I agree about the desperate feel of 3rd Avenue fast food, all vying for a piece of freeway action.

Except Zips. Zips is local, has veggie burgers, and made some sort of effort with their building design. Yay for rabbits on wheels!

Nick said...

Cold crusty ending
A dying breath calls out for
Its quarter-pound love

newsdredge said...

Mayor McCheese weeps
A Fillet O Fish was his
Was burgled, instead

Steve G. said...

arches of gold lure me in
canned cheese seduces
but would you like fries with that?